Check Out My Plastic Writing It Will Give Some Cool Ideas...

Wednesday 18 October

WALT: Use the correct structure in a persuasive text.   

  Ellipsis, Question marks

Should We Have Plastic Bags In Supermarkets?

In my opinion both of plastic bags and paper bags  are a disgraceful waste because it's a waste of money and of course you think that plastic bags are wonderful. Already Countdown and New World is already charging for plastic bags.

Firstly, the Animals can get killed easily because they think that plastic bags are food like jellyfish but they're not and the plastic bags can strangle animals to death. We need to keep our country's plastic bag free. What do you guys think about plastic bags?

Secondly, the Plastic can pollute the ocean and when people want to go and get some  fresh water from the ocean,  kinda can’t because the ocean is filled with all sorts of thing. That’s why we need to stop this. Do you think  we should take away plastic bags? Well, I think we should...

Thirdly, Burning plastic is bad for the ozone layer. It can also cause cancer and raise water level. It can harm birds by the birds eating plastic bags, also because every single day sea creatures die because they eat plastic bags…

Lastly, Imagine you eat a plastic bag how would you feel? Well first you would not be able to breathe, the plastic bag will get stuck in your lungs and you can’t get it out then you will die.

The End!

In the beginning of term 4  in Te Ngahere we did some persuasive writing about should we have plastic bags in supermarkets. Our WALT: was use the correct persuasive structure in our writing. The things that I think I done well was using the correct structure in persuasive, Ellipsis, Question marks. The things that I needed to work on was trying to make my writing make sense.

Check out my writing goals...

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Last week in Te Ngahere, we created a google drawing of our Writing Goals. Our WALT was to Identify our next learning goals in writing. The reason why I choose these goals is because I didn't really know what they meant also What I want to achieve is R5 and move to R6 in writing.

Check Out My Four Shot Movie Plan...

For a week or so In Te Ngahere we have been doing four shot movie. We were in groups my group was Ngahuia, Sharnee, Cilla and I. (WALT: Understand the vocabulary of filmmaking). Our for shot movie is about Kapa Haka.

Check Out My Informational Report...

For the last two weeks in Te Ngahere we have been writing informational reports. WALT: Write an informational report. Our first report was about a country, my country was Canada. In my writing i was focusing on topic sentence and semi colons.

Here is my Informational report.

Check Out My Google Drawing What Ngahuia And I made...

Last week in Te Ngahere WALT: Use Proper nouns and Common nouns, so we could use them in our informational report. We had to pair up in pairs and make a google drawing and insert a table. In that table we had to show Common nouns.

Here is my google drawing that Ngahuia and I made.

Check Out My Ice Blog Post Hope You Enjoy...

Few weeks ago on Friday in Te Ngahere we got to make ice cream if we got 100% on our learning plans. We had to make a google slide and a recount about ice cream. We had to answer questions on the google slide. We also wrote a recount on how we made ice cream, we had to tell what we learned and what our goals in our writing were.  My goals were, to learn how to use Metaphors, similes and Parentheses in our writing.

Surf Life Saving...

Not last week the week after we had Surf Life Saving with some special people, there names where Sam, Liam and Toobs. Surf Lifeguards. They were  teaching use how to be safe in the water. What we did. We played water game activities, playing in the water and just having fun.

Last week on Friday we had a Paihia School Tryathlon. We had to swim, bike and run. We had to walk down to the beach and swim.The boys went first then the girls. After our swim we had to run back school and get our bikes if we brought one, and ride around the field. At the end we got a chocolate protein bar. IT WAS THE BEST DAY EVER

I Remember...

Tuesday 7th February

I Remember...

Jumping on a rocking boat.

Being attached to a tight rope of elastic.

It took off in the air like a flying albatross.

Gazing above the air looking at the shiny glossy sea.

The hot sticky sweat sticking on my hot clothes.

Pulled down from a long strip of string.

Dragged down in the freezing ice cold water from a thick string of rope.

lifted back up and pulled back down on the rocking  boat.

That was summer

I was Learning to notice but use the structure used in the exemplar in my piece of  writing. I write about my summer writing.

After writing something that was is happening

You should put descriptive.

Check Out My Christmas Menu...

This is my yummy Christmas Menu. I hope you have a good time reading my menu it could
 make you want to create all of this yummy food at home.

Check out my Funny Action World Photo...

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Check out my digital book. Hope you enjoyed.

Yesterday we did a story about how to babysit a nana then after we wrote the story we made a digital book and I learned about procedural writing.

Fun writing how to make toast. Check it out...

Last term we made toast. First we wrote a story how to make toast the first story I did there was some mistakes in the story. Then the next day we write another story and we had to fix the mistakes.
Hope enjoy.

Check out my awesome fairy tale and comic strip